after i said
what i shouldn’t have said,
after the words settled as dust
on a cluttered kitchen table,
i turned, and tumbled into a photo on the fridge
of you, me and the girl between us.
i got tangled in its grinning trinity
and couldn’t tell whether the hand cradling her back
was yours or mine—
lean, tanned fingers, or mine in shadow?
nails clean-cropped or ragged with worry?
and just when i’d almost worked out
whether it was your beginning or my ending,
the glass i was filling overflowed
and wept cold tears of surprise.


8 Responses to “photo”  

  1. 1 Songbird

    I don’t know how to say what I want to say without having it sound cloying or rah-rah-ish, except to say if I had a lighter I would flick it, and I want to know when there will be a mother’s version of a beatnik poetry cafe, where we could hear you reading this and share our own tears.

  2. 2 spookyrach

    snap!

  3. 3 Listing Straight

    What Songbird said…

  4. 4 Cheesehead

    Ditto

  5. 5 NotShyChiRev

    Sadly glorious.

  6. 6 Linda (FM)

    (o)

  7. 7 Scog Blog

    Beautiful and resonant. Perfect.

  8. 8 stcasserole

    What Songbird said.

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