Comments on: long title, short poem http://reverendmother.org/2007-07-18/long-title-short-poem Thu, 21 Aug 2008 06:48:14 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.2.1 By: Mamala http://reverendmother.org/2007-07-18/long-title-short-poem#comment-23497 Mamala Wed, 18 Jul 2007 20:24:19 +0000 http://reverendmother.org/2007-07-18/long-title-short-poem#comment-23497 How about hug(gis)s? How about hug(gis)s?

]]> By: towanda http://reverendmother.org/2007-07-18/long-title-short-poem#comment-23492 towanda Wed, 18 Jul 2007 19:39:45 +0000 http://reverendmother.org/2007-07-18/long-title-short-poem#comment-23492 I bet you could get haggis through customs...you know, if you put it in a plastic bottle and then a quart size ziploc bag... I bet you could get haggis through customs…you know, if you put it in a plastic bottle and then a quart size ziploc bag…

]]> By: Kathryn http://reverendmother.org/2007-07-18/long-title-short-poem#comment-23491 Kathryn Wed, 18 Jul 2007 19:38:45 +0000 http://reverendmother.org/2007-07-18/long-title-short-poem#comment-23491 Oh...Cuddly Highland Cows were both widely available and really quite charming last time I was north of the border... Wish there were a hope of connecting with you while you're on the right side of the Pond, but it's just not going to happen, is it...But have a wonderful trip, & try not to miss the girls too too hugely xx Oh…Cuddly Highland Cows were both widely available and really quite charming last time I was north of the border…
Wish there were a hope of connecting with you while you’re on the right side of the Pond, but it’s just not going to happen, is it…But have a wonderful trip, & try not to miss the girls too too hugely xx

]]> By: reverendmother http://reverendmother.org/2007-07-18/long-title-short-poem#comment-23489 reverendmother Wed, 18 Jul 2007 19:18:45 +0000 http://reverendmother.org/2007-07-18/long-title-short-poem#comment-23489 This "poem" was inspired by this week's writing workshop which talked about line breaks and stanzas. The lecture included two one-line poems, both much more clever than mine (for one thing, able to be set up without resorting to a 17-word title). Mom, I remember you brought me a doll that wore a really colorful dress a la Carnaval. You turned it over and pulled the dress the other way and there was a doll on the other side, wearing something equally striking. What to bring C and M? Haggis? This “poem” was inspired by this week’s writing workshop which talked about line breaks and stanzas. The lecture included two one-line poems, both much more clever than mine (for one thing, able to be set up without resorting to a 17-word title).

Mom, I remember you brought me a doll that wore a really colorful dress a la Carnaval. You turned it over and pulled the dress the other way and there was a doll on the other side, wearing something equally striking.

What to bring C and M? Haggis?

]]> By: Mamala http://reverendmother.org/2007-07-18/long-title-short-poem#comment-23488 Mamala Wed, 18 Jul 2007 18:59:45 +0000 http://reverendmother.org/2007-07-18/long-title-short-poem#comment-23488 When you were about C's age and your sis was about M's age, your dad and I took a trip to Rio/Brazil for about the same length of time you will be gone. Although it was very liberating to be away from kiddos, it was also a time for me to treasure and reflect on what I loved (and missed) the most about being a mamala. When you were about C’s age and your sis was about M’s age, your dad and I took a trip to Rio/Brazil for about the same length of time you will be gone. Although it was very liberating to be away from kiddos, it was also a time for me to treasure and reflect on what I loved (and missed) the most about being a mamala.

]]> By: Mindy http://reverendmother.org/2007-07-18/long-title-short-poem#comment-23475 Mindy Wed, 18 Jul 2007 16:39:47 +0000 http://reverendmother.org/2007-07-18/long-title-short-poem#comment-23475 Love that. Love that.

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