Comments on: pickapoem

By: ms rev or not

ms rev or not — Wed, 21 Nov 2007 22:54:12 +0000

am i too late?

forty
clementines (a snippet of a poem)… yes.
poem (needs a title)
3 days after returning

no rhyme, no reason; just the ones i liked the best.

By: Karen

Karen — Mon, 19 Nov 2007 00:51:45 +0000

day break absolutely in first on my list with clementines (deeply touching for me), boo radley, ash wednesday following in that order………….your talent continues to shine.

By: concretegodmother

concretegodmother — Sun, 18 Nov 2007 08:37:51 +0000

clementines is powerful, memorable. the english teacher in me, who just finished to kill a mockingbird with her sophomores, likes boo radley. advent is also such a strong sensory experience — both the poem and the season.

By: Chaplainmom

Chaplainmom — Sun, 18 Nov 2007 02:28:45 +0000

I love Advent so much I actually think about it from time to time…40 days is amazing as well. All of them are wonderful, so choose as you are led!

By: Sarah

Sarah — Sun, 18 Nov 2007 00:43:03 +0000

To confuse things even more…daybreak.

By: spookyrach

spookyrach — Sat, 17 Nov 2007 15:13:57 +0000

3 days after returning or clementines.

By: Kathryn

Kathryn — Sat, 17 Nov 2007 09:55:56 +0000

Oh, a hard call
For me “Grief” “Ash Wednesday” “Forty” “Clementines” and Untitled stand out…and I truly couldn’t choose between those without living with all of them over a longer period. You have such a gift, and it’s good that you are using and refining it.

By: Kelley

Kelley — Sat, 17 Nov 2007 04:31:23 +0000

These are so beautiful. Some I have read, some not. I am very moved by your writing.

Which to choose? Sunset on Iona
Ash Wednesday
Clementines

These are my favorites. And here you are living “Advent” again….almost.

By: Mamala

Mamala — Sat, 17 Nov 2007 03:52:27 +0000

40, definitely 40, but then, I’m biased….