weirdly bittersweet thought for the day at reverendmother

weirdly bittersweet thought for the day

for R

one far off day,
his perfect hands

that clutch
the toothpaste, or the baby’s
cortisone cream,
Just So, in the abundant middle,
molding them
expertly to his tightening fist

will cease to be—
along with the rest of him—
and perhaps i will miss those
shriveled up reminders
littering the bathroom,
and wish i had not sighed
as i smashed them all
flat.

Published by reverendmother 1 year, 5 months ago in spouse, poetry

5 Responses to “weirdly bittersweet thought for the day”

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1 Marci Mar 12th, 2009 at 10:29 pm

That is beautiful and powerful. Thanks for sharing.
2 Mamala Mar 13th, 2009 at 5:22 am

One of your best and a reminder to treasure even the “messes” in our lives.
3 Kelley Mar 13th, 2009 at 8:39 am

I love this one…very moving. We all have our funny little quirks with our loved ones, don’t we?
4 gmommy Mar 13th, 2009 at 8:59 am

My baby! So sweet and I am afraid D has some of the same feelings about me but does not express it so poetically.
5 Sarah Mar 13th, 2009 at 9:57 pm

R is one fortunate man. You are an insightful writer and spouse.
what a combination.

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